In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion
The average age of living of human beings is on the rise around the globe. I opine that this trend has more drawbacks, and in forthcoming paragraphs, its benefits and negative sides will be discussed.
The primary advantage of longer age of humans is that the experience acquired by seniors can be utilised by individuals. in this way, many people committed when they were young. Thus, people can make their life trouble free . for instance, I always approach my elders to seek advice whenever I am in trouble, and they always have a solution to almost all problems. Furthermore, a long life can help many to pursue their dreams when they become older because during young are they might be occupied by many tasks, and they were not able to fulfil their dreams. However, these positives sides do not include drawbacks they impose on society.
One obvious disadvantage associated with average increased age is the financial burden on the government to serve people who are above 60. With increase their population of senior citizens, the government has to increase their budgets to pay pensions. Moreover, older people fall sick quite frequently and thus to provide decent healthcare system. As a result, to compensate the finance, the government increases the taxes on young people, which can affect the lifestyle of them very adversely. Students show that in Japan, in particular, has to increase taxes on many commodities to pay for pensions and health of older residents. Another disadvantage is that the country will have fewer youth population which pays taxes to function the government because many parents, worldwide, prefer to have one child only.
In collusion, overall, the disadvantages of having a longer age of citizens have stronger have a stronger agreement as compared to its advantages. While there is life experience which is helpful for many, the fact remains that financial cost to government will increase taxes, to compensate bills and budget
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- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71850954855 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0361407024 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146057744058 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463466849426 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284984234429 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782373861837 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231218709949 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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