In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion.
In this day and age, population is considered a hotly-debated topic. People experience longer life extension than ever before. However, there are some pros and cons in this issue and personally, I strongly support that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, living longer means going through different world events. The more people live, the more they can experience. For example, there are considerable events in various periods so if people live longer, they can have a chance to see all of that and how it changes throughout the time. Besides, the old generation masters working and soft skills. It can be said that a good working company can not be developed without experienced employees, so the elderly play a crucial role in the workplace. Moreover, the older people being experts in terms of life can give good advice to youngsters.
On the other hand, due to the increase in age, the retirement status has to be changed. The working age is extended for years depending on particular terms. For that reason, people may have to deal with serious health problems and spend more money on curing sickness from an over-working period. Furthermore, this issue may lead to a lack of job opportunities for the younger generation. Graduate students must compete more intensively not only with peers but also senior employees.
In conclusion, despite the result in health and employment issues, the advantages are dominant. The contribution of elderly people can not be denied in our modern society. The world is developing so their experience is a great value for us.
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- The line graph below shows the result of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country 78
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 84
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0608365019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77549350996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1457930757 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2941176471 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766766595 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259704823313 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259724404057 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499881181629 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178634224365 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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