In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion.
Over the last few decades, many countries worldwide have seen a substantial increase in life expectancy due to advanced health care. While it is argued that this trend is advantageous, others believe that it can harm both individuals and society. In this essay, both these viewpoints will be discussed.
It is evident that a longer lifespan could be beneficial to human beings. The most vital advantage is that retirees often possess a wealth of experience and specialized knowledge obtained through their long working careers. As a consequence, an elderly population might serve as mentors to future generations and provide guidance when making critical decisions such as signing large contracts. Furthermore, with the help of advanced medicine, the elderly are striving for longevity, which translates to prolonged working lives even after their retirement age can provide them a source of income independently without their children's employment. Secondly, retirees can pursue their interests or passions such as traveling or playing sports. This could be useful to their mental health and enable them to maintain sane and comfortable in life.
I am of the opinion that the detrimental effects of this phenomenon could be of more significance than the mentioned benefits. To begin, both society and family may face financial issues to meet the needs of an aging population. Indeed, the government must cover a large amount of pension and welfare, resulting in a budget shortfall for other priority areas such as education and the environment. Moreover, families may suffer from severe financial burdens in providing healthcare and insurance to seniors, the majority of whom are unable to work or earn, which has a negative influence on the family's economy. Another critical factor is that longer life expectancy can worsen overpopulation concerns. More people means an increased demand for food, water, housing, energy, healthcare, transportation, and more. And all that consumption contributes to ecological degradation, increased conflicts, and a higher risk of large-scale disasters like pandemics.
In conclusion, while some people argue that increasing lifespan is good for its enhancement of living quality and occupation, in my opinion, these must imbalance the implications for health and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55649717514 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00869206927 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6116908688 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.705882353 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132454166647 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400191829715 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477615675 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842624460789 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510060363582 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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