Human life expectancy has globally grown in 21st century. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, in this essay, I would argue its drawbacks are more significant.
On the plus side, improvement in life expectancy has given elderly people the great advantages. To begin with, these old folk have a chance to stay with their families longer. To build upon my point a little more, senior citizens have worked for a long time; therefore, they deserve to rest and spend more time with their grandchildren after retiring. In addition, given that, these days, old people are typically healthier than the previous generation, they can take a fancy to being more active and pursue their own interests and dreams. To illustrate, x-generation can travel the whole world and take up activities they have always been interested in.
However, “Every coin has its two sides”, one problem, with longevity is ageing population and rising the number of old people, the vulnerable groups in society, who have normally required healthcare services. To put it differently, most of the elderlies suffering from chronic diseases, like diabetes and arthritis, should undergo special medical treatments and health services which are the financial burden for governments. In fact, governments have to significantly allocate budgets to build more hospitals and nursing homes, hiring more nurses, and providing more health insurance. Furthermore, due to disordering problems in the aged group, some of them cannot do their own work and may imagine yourself as a burden on others; therefore, it is highly likely that they get mental diseases, like depression.
To sum up, population in the world is increasingly living long into old age, this trend has both upsides and downsides and I think its drawbacks outweigh its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nk its drawbacks outweigh its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28275862069 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78298721447 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651724137931 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4446712013 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070788059822 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329442453491 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422756864164 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619903425611 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473890090439 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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