Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make. Does it have a positive or negative impact?
These days, thanks to development communication technology, many people from entire the world can interact with each other whenever they want. In other words, developing technology brings us new ways to communicate with each other easily and omitted distance limitations.
According to improvement communication technology, people can connect to the internet and enroll in several social websites like Facebook and twitter. These sites provide them with golden opportunity to make a friendship with people who are from different countries with a vast cultures variety. More over, thanks to invention smart phones and notebook, people would be able to see each other from far distance and talk together about any subject by lowest cost. These technologies help them to increase their relationships which would not be the case if they wanted to use the old ways to make a friendship. Furthermore, these technologies contribute to save money and time which are key factors to tackle economical problems.
In contrast, it is clear that using communication tools have positive impact on increasing the quantity of relationship while the quality of this kind of relationship is poor. These technologies induce people stay in front of their computers and notebooks for long time and do not enjoy from other kind of relationships. Little by little they tend to interact with their friends by these technologies and deprive themselves from face to face contacts and going out with their friends. Using these technologies encourage people to be isolate which will eventually lead to increasing psychological problems in the modern societies.
In conclusion, I think that although developing technology facilitate communications among people all over the world, several problems are appeared through using these technologies which make irreversible damages if people do not pay most attention to them. People should be used these tools for emergency circumstances and met their friends face to face.
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