With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators student literacy is decreasing dramatically What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about You should write at least 250 words You should spen

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With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about?

You should write at least 250 words.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Science and technology has revolutionized the whole world. Its trend is beneficial in every field. Undoubtedly the growing importance of computers and the calculators is decreasing literacy level. But the progress of science and technology have a multitudes of advantages and disadvantages. Here, I would like to put the contrast in my own way.

First and foremost, I want to shore up my former view. Inventions of devices for students had made their curious work more fragile. With the click of a mouse students can explore vast material related to education. That's way importance of classes have decreased in great deal. Moreover, devices such as calculators are very fast and so much accurate. So students can ameliorate their work with these tools.

Myriad points to set up my latter view. Students have made their habitat of learning directly from computers. This trend had reduced their creativity level. Furthermore, many problems related to health also arises. Direct impact of computer screen decrease eyes vision. Now a days the student use calculator in a common matter. They do not want to reckon with their own mind. Consequently, they cannot build up their mind.

At last, I think that there are strong arguments behalf of each view point, but issue is to find a more appropriate view among them. Finally, I make out that with the inventions of gadget for student, lack of the exacting power among students has increased to a large extent. Students are becoming monotonous in the field of education due to science and technology.

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But the progress of science and technology have a multitudes of advantages
But the progress ... has a multitudes of advantages

Sentence: Direct impact of computer screen decrease eyes vision.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to eyes and vision

flaws:
No. of Words: 255 350
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.812 7.5

The essay topic is not only for students.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1256 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.925 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.7 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.812 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.253 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.436 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

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paragraph 1: introduction -- explain in your own words about the issue and give a thesis statement at the end.

paragraph 2: reason 1 + why reason 1 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.

paragraph 3: reason 2 + why reason 2 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.

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An simple example (Eating at home or restaurant) for paragraph 2:
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant; I don't need to pay tips...) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentence: for example, a sandwich can cost me $10 at restaurant, but it only cost me $5 at home.) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
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