In many parts of the world, children are now given more freedom than they used to have. Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, juveniles in someplace in the world tend to have more freedom than before. In my opinion, I believe that this development would be more negative than positive for both individuals and society.
There are various reasons why children have more freedom nowadays. One of the reasons is the environment. They are living in a world where children have the right to do whatever they want and are protected by the policy’s government. In addition, parents are also the reason that children have free now. By dint of a busy work schedule, parents often concentrate on their jobs more than their children. As a result, they do not have time to monitor their juveniles which leads to children having more freedom.
For these reasons, I believe that it causes many adverse impacts on this development. The increase in the high rates of juvenile delinquency will pose a serious threat to society. When children do not have enough knowledge of the surrounding world, children can be enticed easily into bad things in society such as crime, violence, and drugs. As a result of the fact that the percentage of committing crimes at a young age will be increased and if it is lingering for the after time, the society will be in an insecure status and lost a generation. Moreover, juveniles can lose their lives when they commit the crime.
In conclusion, I believe that children who have more freedom can easily do the wrong things, and this development will have a bad effect on society in some specific ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80608365019 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61169404782 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3157156442 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392732416631 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136086162893 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956697522602 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249982439243 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102372116168 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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