wheat experts from 1985 to 1990

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wheat experts from 1985 to 1990

The given line graph illustrates the number of wheat which is exported by Australia, Canada, and the European community over a period of 15 years starting from 1985.
Overall, it is clear that while the figure for Canada and the European community witnessed a moderate increase, the opposite was true for Australia. Also, it is noticeable that the figure for Australia was the lowest point over the period shown.

As can be seen from the line graph,  in the year 1985 witnessed a marginal increase to 16 in the European community, whereas Canada and Australia went up gradually, at nearly 16 and under 15 respectively at the same time. From 1986 onwards, the figure for Canada reached a peak at 25. At the same time, the European community experienced a remained stable before climbing slightly to 15, while there was a moderate fall to an average of 10  in Australia in 1989.

Looking at the graph in more detail, in 1988 wheat which is exported in Canada deteriorated, but later increased marginally to under 20. To be specific, the European community witnessed a steady increase to over 20. In contrast, there was a slow decline to nearly 10 in European communication at the end of the period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86473429952 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73267734951 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.977192979 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100748034855 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467423041909 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627030209776 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07789304493 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727601437379 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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