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... in the world with the most followers is Christianity. In the beginning, Christia...
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... religion, and it turns out that it is a branch of Judaism. The Jewish religion i...
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... most popular religions on Earth. In the world, 2.2 billion individuals are Chris...
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...ion are Jewish. Christianity and Judaism are important religions to discuss becau...
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...out art and architecture, historians can research the religion in depth. In Dura-...
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..., there is interesting religious art and architecture. In Dura-Europos, there...
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...e and the Christian Building. The Jewish synagogue represents four elements: piet...
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...titude towards God, power of divinity, a place for the Jews to worship, and peopl...
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...ur elements are crucial because it helps researchers discover the artistic and re...
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...ons the Jews made. Inside the synagogue, the walls are covered with multiple squa...
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...tangular drawings of events from the Old Testament. There is one drawing of the c...
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... Red Sea. The drawing includes a crucial element, hands coming down from the sky ...
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...e Israelites to cross the sea. The Torah niche is the most important structure in...
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...portant structure inside the Synagogue. The Torah niche contains three drawings: ...
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...ynagogue. The Torah niche contains three drawings: one of the drawings is the men...
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...resents Judaism, the second one is doors to the Jewish Temple, and the last drawi...
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...t drawing is the sacrifice of Isaac. The Christian Building, also located in Dur...
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...opos, has an interesting history because it was originally a house, and it was re...
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... to become an area for baptism. When one enters the room, at the end of the hall ...
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...lled with water. The basin with water is used to symbolize holy water, and it is ...
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...e’s sins. There is a drawing of a sheep, which metaphorically represents Christ b...
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...ribes himself as a sheepherder who takes good care of the flock. There are also p...
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...s of women with torches walking toward a sarcophagus. The sarcophagus is a symbol...
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...rists tomb and his resurrection. Another interesting detail found inside the Chri...
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...nted figures. A particularly interesting event depicted is when Christ has a halo...
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...ng on the water. Christ then has to save Peter from drowning because he tried to ...
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... constructed based on Christian thoughts are seen within tombs. The tombs are a n...
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... building and painting that embraces art and architecture during the era. When en...
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...see the tombs there are catacombs, small rooms, and chambers that are built to ho...
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...The tombs of the dead are decorated with immense detail since it includes a self-...
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...ceased. Also, the deceased area contains multiple paintings that carry important ...
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...s. There are paintings once again of the sheepherder, which symbolized Christ as ...
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...s great at protecting his flock. Another painting involves a baptism which is imp...
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...stianity because it is a greeting to the Christian Church. The symbolization of G...
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... to overcome death, save the people, and wake the dead to life is also represente...
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...nd Rome have multiple similarities among themselves. A crucial similarity between...
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...ulture of both places is the devotion to religion. In Dura-Europos, the religion ...
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...ty is the important architectural forms, such as the tombs in Rome and the Torah ...
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... the Baptism area in Dura-Europos. These architectural forms show historians the ...
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... past individuals. The second similarity between Rome and Dura-Europos is the pai...
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... painted are the sheepherder and women. The sheepherder is symbolic because it is...
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...r and women. The sheepherder is symbolic because it is used to describe Christ as...
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...rist as a great protector of his flock. The women are symbolic of piety since in ...
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... of his flock. The women are symbolic of piety since in Dura-Europos the women ar...
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... Christ’s tomb, while in Rome there is a woman who is praying. Lastly, the fourth...
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...larity between both architectures is the representation of water. In Rome, there ...
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... child being baptized, which is symbolic because it represents the cleansing one ...
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...th. While in Dura-Europos, the Christian Building contains a basin where holy wat...
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...me and Dura-Europos, there are also many differences between the two. The first d...
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...e number of religions worshiped, in Rome Christianity is worshiped, while in Dura...
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... and Christianity. Another difference is the architectural buildings, in Rome, th...
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...bs and tombs, while in Dura there is the Jewish synagogue and the Christian Build...
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...ifference has to be the audience of each architectural building, in Rome, the aud...
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...t and architecture created. In Rome, the catacombs and tombs were made out of Chr...
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...ian thoughts. While, in Dura, the Jewish Synagogue and Christian building was ins...
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...d by the Old and New Testament. The last difference is the overall theme of Rome ...
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...Europos. The catacombs and tombs in Rome are mainly about the dead and God. Howev...
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...-Europose the theme of the synagogue and the building is more about God. In c...
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...ost popular religion, Judaism is also as important. Rome and Dura-Europos are two...
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...at show individuals devotion to religion in the third century. Rome’s architectur...
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...e the catacombs and tombs that honor the dead. While in Dura-Europos, the Jewish ...
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...and the Christian Building honor God and use architecture to display the religiou...
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...s. Rome and Dura do a magnificent job in displaying the piety individuals from th...
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... the third century felt towards Christ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 74.0 13.1623246493 562% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 47.0 10.4138276553 451% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 125.0 41.998997996 298% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5328.0 1615.20841683 330% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1002.0 315.596192385 317% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31736526946 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.62622285221 4.20363070211 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03962264426 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 359.0 176.041082164 204% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358283433134 0.561755894193 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1627.2 506.74238477 321% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 41.0 2.52805611222 1622% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 21.0 4.76152304609 441% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 59.0 16.0721442886 367% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7106006687 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3050847458 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9830508475 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79661016949 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 67.0 4.38176352705 1529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 65.0 5.01903807615 1295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 8.67935871743 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 3.4128256513 586% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210601649238 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521227115679 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543979220625 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486580751016 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537451088444 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 183.0 78.4519038076 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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