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- fsdfsd 56
- Universities should spend more money on improving facilities like library computer labs than on hiring famous teachers 70
- Universities should spend more money on improving facilities like library computer labs than on hiring famous teachers 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost 73
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... in the world with the most followers is Christianity. In the beginning, Christia...
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... religion, and it turns out that it is a branch of Judaism. The Jewish religion i...
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... most popular religions on Earth. In the world, 2.2 billion individuals are Chris...
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...ion are Jewish. Christianity and Judaism are important religions to discuss becau...
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...out art and architecture, historians can research the religion in depth. In Dura-...
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..., there is interesting religious art and architecture. In Dura-Europos, there...
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...e and the Christian Building. The Jewish synagogue represents four elements: piet...
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...titude towards God, power of divinity, a place for the Jews to worship, and peopl...
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...ur elements are crucial because it helps researchers discover the artistic and re...
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...ons the Jews made. Inside the synagogue, the walls are covered with multiple squa...
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...tangular drawings of events from the Old Testament. There is one drawing of the c...
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... Red Sea. The drawing includes a crucial element, hands coming down from the sky ...
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...e Israelites to cross the sea. The Torah niche is the most important structure in...
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...portant structure inside the Synagogue. The Torah niche contains three drawings: ...
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...ynagogue. The Torah niche contains three drawings: one of the drawings is the men...
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...resents Judaism, the second one is doors to the Jewish Temple, and the last drawi...
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...t drawing is the sacrifice of Isaac. The Christian Building, also located in Dur...
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...opos, has an interesting history because it was originally a house, and it was re...
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... to become an area for baptism. When one enters the room, at the end of the hall ...
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...lled with water. The basin with water is used to symbolize holy water, and it is ...
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...e’s sins. There is a drawing of a sheep, which metaphorically represents Christ b...
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...ribes himself as a sheepherder who takes good care of the flock. There are also p...
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...s of women with torches walking toward a sarcophagus. The sarcophagus is a symbol...
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...rists tomb and his resurrection. Another interesting detail found inside the Chri...
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...nted figures. A particularly interesting event depicted is when Christ has a halo...
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...ng on the water. Christ then has to save Peter from drowning because he tried to ...
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... constructed based on Christian thoughts are seen within tombs. The tombs are a n...
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... building and painting that embraces art and architecture during the era. When en...
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...see the tombs there are catacombs, small rooms, and chambers that are built to ho...
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...The tombs of the dead are decorated with immense detail since it includes a self-...
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...ceased. Also, the deceased area contains multiple paintings that carry important ...
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...s. There are paintings once again of the sheepherder, which symbolized Christ as ...
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...s great at protecting his flock. Another painting involves a baptism which is imp...
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...stianity because it is a greeting to the Christian Church. The symbolization of G...
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... to overcome death, save the people, and wake the dead to life is also represente...
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...nd Rome have multiple similarities among themselves. A crucial similarity between...
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...ulture of both places is the devotion to religion. In Dura-Europos, the religion ...
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...ty is the important architectural forms, such as the tombs in Rome and the Torah ...
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... the Baptism area in Dura-Europos. These architectural forms show historians the ...
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... past individuals. The second similarity between Rome and Dura-Europos is the pai...
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... painted are the sheepherder and women. The sheepherder is symbolic because it is...
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...r and women. The sheepherder is symbolic because it is used to describe Christ as...
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...rist as a great protector of his flock. The women are symbolic of piety since in ...
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... of his flock. The women are symbolic of piety since in Dura-Europos the women ar...
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... Christ’s tomb, while in Rome there is a woman who is praying. Lastly, the fourth...
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...larity between both architectures is the representation of water. In Rome, there ...
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... child being baptized, which is symbolic because it represents the cleansing one ...
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...th. While in Dura-Europos, the Christian Building contains a basin where holy wat...
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...me and Dura-Europos, there are also many differences between the two. The first d...
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...e number of religions worshiped, in Rome Christianity is worshiped, while in Dura...
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... and Christianity. Another difference is the architectural buildings, in Rome, th...
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...bs and tombs, while in Dura there is the Jewish synagogue and the Christian Build...
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...ifference has to be the audience of each architectural building, in Rome, the aud...
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...in Dura, the audience is the living. The following difference is the inspiration ...
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...t and architecture created. In Rome, the catacombs and tombs were made out of Chr...
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...ian thoughts. While, in Dura, the Jewish Synagogue and Christian building was ins...
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...d by the Old and New Testament. The last difference is the overall theme of Rome ...
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...Europos. The catacombs and tombs in Rome are mainly about the dead and God. Howev...
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...-Europose the theme of the synagogue and the building is more about God. In c...
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...ost popular religion, Judaism is also as important. Rome and Dura-Europos are two...
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...at show individuals devotion to religion in the third century. Rome’s architectur...
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...e the catacombs and tombs that honor the dead. While in Dura-Europos, the Jewish ...
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...and the Christian Building honor God and use architecture to display the religiou...
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...s. Rome and Dura do a magnificent job in displaying the piety individuals from th...
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... the third century felt towards Christ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 74.0 13.1623246493 562% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 47.0 10.4138276553 451% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 125.0 41.998997996 298% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5328.0 1615.20841683 330% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1002.0 315.596192385 317% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31736526946 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.62622285221 4.20363070211 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03962264426 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 359.0 176.041082164 204% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358283433134 0.561755894193 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1627.2 506.74238477 321% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 41.0 2.52805611222 1622% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 21.0 4.76152304609 441% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 59.0 16.0721442886 367% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7106006687 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3050847458 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9830508475 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79661016949 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 67.0 4.38176352705 1529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 65.0 5.01903807615 1295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 8.67935871743 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 3.4128256513 586% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210601649238 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521227115679 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543979220625 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486580751016 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537451088444 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 183.0 78.4519038076 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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