the best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school to what extent do you agree

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the best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. to what extent do you agree?

Submitted by eyraen on Sun, 05/08/2022 - 09:12

team sports play a major role in the development of cooperation in school children. I agree with the statement because such activities often make interpersonal relationships, sharing habits, and work together without selfishness.

students who participate in team activities would be able to share things, and ideas. such cooperative nature makes them understand each other and would develop a problem-solving capacity to some extent. for example, team sports like football teach the players how to play as a group, how to defend, how to distribute, and so on. similarly, athletic relay makes the participants how to make comfort each other to succeed.

individual play or solo sports are also comfortable for the students in school to be competitive and cooperative. however, such plays sometimes create selfishness or pride in oneself. in other words, individual sports might not need others' support or cooperation to win, whereas stamina or intelligence of participants may lead to success. for instance, single badminton player, running races.

team sports often make the students share not only the success but also losing, it would help the pupil to have character building and facing to failure as a group. such cooperation would help other low-tempered or introverted students to come in front or go forward in difficult situations. students who attend group activities often have the guts to seek help and provide support and comfort to others.

to sum up, it is true that team sports give an opportunity to schoolchildren to develop cooperation with others.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ovide support and comfort to others. to sum up, it is true that team sports giv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in other words, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04317697787 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8809432023 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168881476488 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629588869528 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704868380007 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106612063656 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462655892708 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Team
team sports play a major role in the develop...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...d work together without selfishness. students who participate in team activities woul...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...uld be able to share things, and ideas. such cooperative nature makes them understan...
^^^^
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...roblem-solving capacity to some extent. for example, team sports like football teac...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individual
... make comfort each other to succeed. individual play or solo sports are also comfortabl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...hool to be competitive and cooperative. however, such plays sometimes create selfishnes...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...create selfishness or pride in oneself. in other words, individual sports might no...
^^
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ce of participants may lead to success. for instance, single badminton player, runn...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Team
...gle badminton player, running races. team sports often make the students share no...
^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...lding and facing to failure as a group. such cooperation would help other low-temper...
^^^^
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
... or go forward in difficult situations. students who attend group activities often have ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ovide support and comfort to others. to sum up, it is true that team sports giv...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in other words, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04317697787 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8809432023 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168881476488 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629588869528 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704868380007 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106612063656 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462655892708 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.