Men and women, due to their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many jobs
The issue states that due to the inherent physical differences. men and women are not equally suited for many tasks. I disagree with the author.
In today's time, men and women are being considered more equal than ever. The gender discrimination has reduced significantly. Both men and women are taking up all sort of jobs. The physical differences do not stop them. For example, the jobs like construction workers, delivery man or sports were predominantly taken by men, but today women from all over the world do these jobs efficiently. Men and women both go through intense training and serve the country as police officers or as a part of the army force.
Today, in all of the fields, there is incredible competition. Men and women are both excelling in the fields and outshining each other. Jobs that were previously done solely by women like household activites are now done by men. A lot of men become housemakers while the women earn for the family. Even in the field of education, men and women are both thriving, competing with each other equally. For example, in India, cricket was mostly just played by men. Only the mens team played internationally and it was not consdiered to be a womens sport. But today, the Indian women's cricket team is playing very well and gaining viewers from all over.
Most of the jobs require more of a mental effort than a physical one, which does not bar women or men to excel in any of the fileds. Usually women do the cooking, but today, most of the top chefs are men. Most prime ministers are men, however, the prime minister of New Zeeland is a women and doing an incredible job. Both men and women are CEOs and are leading their companies to new heights. Sports like weightlifting and javeline throw are now being played by both men and women.
Inspite of all the points discussed above, there are still a few tasks that might not be equally suited for both men and women like weigthlifting. which is usually held separately for men and women. However, both genders are slowly pushing themselves and competing against each other. The physical differences do not bar them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Men
...e to the inherent physical differences. men and women are not equally suited for ma...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... a part of the army force. Today, in all of the fields, there is incredible competition...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
... the prime minister of New Zeeland is a women and doing an incredible job. Both men a...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... both men and women like weigthlifting. which is usually held separately for men and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74393530997 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54966292229 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495956873315 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5719002323 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6923076923 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2692307692 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448647896342 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130180905818 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978064770469 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29774199774 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976688399671 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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