Nowadays, people have focused on the problem of projects based on financial issues. The problem triggered a hot debate on the internet. Some people consider children should not manage their own money due to their age, others hold the opposite attitude. From my perspective, I firmly believe that the latter group carries more weight and I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, some individuals claim that children are too young to face a society with criminals and seduction. In contrast, Letting the youth exposes to the environment without parents' navigation can increase their ability to prevent dangerously and will bring a positive impact on their lives. As a result, learning how to manage your own money at a young age can be beneficial.
Moreover, children can obtain the capability to manage living expenses and appreciate their parents' hard work. With limited money to cover daily life and must calculate before spending is likely to teach offspring a valuable lesson and won't take things for granted. For instance, after starting college life and moving away from my parents, I started to realize the importance of financial management since my parents deliver my living expense on the first day of the month, and if I do not spend them wisely, I would have difficulty to survive till the end of the month. As a result, learning how to manage money can be beneficial.
In addition, children can start founding stocks and obtain an interest in investment. Investment is a significant method to gain a fortune in order to have a colorful life. To achieve such accomplishment, measures being taken require careful calculation and patient waiting, during the process, children can form characteristics that have a positive impact on their life.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that having opportunities to manage their own wealth have more advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18095238095 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83860653752 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593650793651 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9240812408 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217525626724 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755678879913 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726293476582 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117672805692 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555708850187 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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