“In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies.”
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?”
In many nations, it is common for young people to be put a lot of pressure on studying hard. As a result, they do not have enough free time to do what they want to or enjoy their life. This essay will discuss some primary reasons cause this and offer some possible solutions to the issue.
There are numerous reasons due to this problem. Firstly, parents laid too much pressure on their children. For instance, their parents want them to get high grades at school, then getting a perfect academic result. It may be easy to predict that they might hope their children to get into a top rank university and having a bright future, etc. Additionally, the second reason is that having too many compulsory subjects at school, resulting in they don’t have right to choose what subjects they want to learn or be suitable with their future major or career. Also, if they do not expect to fall behind with their studies, they have to join some additional knowledge classes. As a consequence, they are becoming crazily busy.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. In my opinion, the solution which seems to be most possible is that allow young people to choose subjects, they think that they need to study or those will be necessary for their future. Therefore, they have more interested in their study and work more effectively. They also have more free time to take some extracurricular activities to develop their life skills. Besides, the indispensable solve could be used is parents should not request too much from their children, they should give them more space to have personal development.
To sum up, there are various factors leading to lack of leisure time of young people, be under lots of pressure and having number of possible solutions to tackle this issue. Personally, these solutions should come true as soon as possible because teenagers deserve to have time to enjoy their life and develop comprehensive not just theory at school but life skill from extracurricular activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88793103448 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53227775691 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7502233036 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.058823529 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271022298293 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931181154302 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650731849423 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199162145007 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896448595571 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.