You were offered to join in a company but for some other reasons you can’t join there. Write a letter to the HR of the company. In your letter:
» Explain the reason why you are declining the offer
» Express you gratitude
» Explain you like your current job very much.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir,
The offer letter, dispatch number is A203123, has been issued to me fifteen days ago from the renowned corporate company. The new appointment offer is lucrative certainly and it was also accepted by me as well. But, remorsefully, my decision had to change for not to join cause of some family issues.
Please be informed that my elder son is at class three. Every day at morning, I have to make a trip to reach my adolescence at school, is a major family duty from my side. Unfortunately, new office location will be a different direction from the school lane, if I join there. Thus, travels in these two pathways, I could not manage my time. Additionally, my wife is not also interested to change my job now.
After passing the hurdle interview, the company selected and gave me a chance to work in a famed organization. The compensation package was absolutely better and for that I am really grateful of the HR management.
The environment of my present office is friendly and embracing. All co-workers and supervisors are very helpful and my remuneration is good enough to maintain my family and also has a good career in the current position. Recently, my office resumed some facilities such as PF and gratuity which satisfied me more.
I am looking forward to hearing you.
Yours faithfully,
Arif
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The offer letter, dispatch number is A203123, has been issued
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
for not to join cause of some family issues.
for not joining because of some family issues.
I have to make a trip to reach my adolescence at school, is a major family duty from my side.
I have to make a trip to reach my adolescence at school, which is a major family duty from my side.
travels in these two pathways, I could not manage my time.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
I am looking forward to hearing you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 228 200
No. of Characters: 1050 1000
No. of Different Words: 146 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.886 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.605 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.76 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.978 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4