Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With a variety of media, nowadays, television is a considerable invention of human with some significant improvements now and it is an indispensable entertainment in each famil. Because of dramatical developments so there are a numerous channels broadcasted to serve viewers. Some people claim that the program’s quality is getting worse and worse, whilst others believe having more programs is good and it does not affec its quality a lot. In my opinion, I agree that both views also have their own advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, having various TV programs, for instance, news, educational or sport programs provide the wide range selections for different views. For example, children prefr cartoon channels than bussiness ones or some people who do not like to watch sport events, they can switch to another. Furthermore, they can also watch their favourite programs, which they have missed on other channels. Moreover, audiences take a great deal of useful information to widen their knowlegde and would no get bored when thay have a choice from a variety of TV channels.
On ther other hand, many people think that with cutthroat competitions between these TV stations to attract more televiewers, they have to telecast different kinds of TV entertainments; therefore, they are not sure about content’s quality. Hence, the originality of programs is being defaced by telecasting authorities. In addition, there are more and more channels createdon commercial purposes, a lot of commercial advertisements are added during performace and it may reduce enjoyment of viewers.
To recapitulate, i prefer quality to quantity without the number of viewers, boring channels will be removed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ispensable entertainment in each famil. Because of dramatical developments so there are...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'channel'?
Suggestion: channel
...al developments so there are a numerous channels broadcasted to serve viewers. Some peop...
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Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...wlegde and would no get bored when thay have a choice from a variety of TV channels....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...enjoyment of viewers. To recapitulate, i prefer quality to quantity without the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09460652323 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.753794621 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297394335608 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936360768509 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751124389365 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158237981679 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872148479663 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.