These two pie charts illustrate the proportion of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions by Australian household. It is clear that heating represents the largest portion of the energy use whereas water heating makes up the biggest portion of the greenhouse gas emissions. Meanwhile, Cooling is the device that uses the lowest energy and yields the lowest greenhouse gas emissions.
Nearly three-quarters of energy is used for heating and water heating, 42% and 30% respectively. This, however, is different from the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions produced by Australian household which oth...
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