Cambridge Book 12 - Test 1- Writing Task 2
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this government.
In our hectic world, many people think that the government should spend more budget on many aspects of society infrastructure, such as railways than roads in order to people have convenience lives. To a certain extent, I agree that spending money on railways should be done by governments. However, I also think that the roads have an important role in society.
To begin with, donating budget to the railways has the significant importance in every society. To be more specific, railways are a kind of public transport system which by improving quality of them help reduce traffic jam. Indeed, many people use their private cars because of shoddy public transport system, so they increase remarkably noise and air pollution, especially in the megacity. If the governments spend money on both improving and developing of the railways, not only will people encourage the use of trains but also it can help preserve the environment. Finally, goods transportation will become faster by the expansion of the railways instead of roads.
Furthermore, funding money on the roads is really important and should be applied by governments. In fact, safe roads have dramatic roles in citizen’s lives, and the governments try to decrease the number of people’s deaths due to accidents by improving roads. In addition, everyone should deserve a chance to use basic needs, especially in the distant areas where cannot travel by public transport systems, such as airplane and train. Actually, having access to wherever around the country is provided by spending money on developing roads.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that donating money on both railways and roads should be done by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, really, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25362318841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82627275495 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2847291047 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216079007571 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818223412194 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635218449422 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141728215663 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540498776951 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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