Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries traveled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traveling abroad gives people an opportunity to unwind and feel more happiness. Nowadays, it can be seen that quite a few people start taking trips to foreign countries. While some advocate that travel may have more demerits than merits linked to the places visited, I completely disagree with this idea believing that traveling helps people to broaden their horizons. Also it leads to economic growth for nations.
To begin with, exploring the world contributes to the cultural exchange and enrichment of host countries. For instance, before tourism’s development some regions were isolated in the world, so almost nobody was familiar with their customs which were on the verge of disappearance. However, with the prevalence of this tourism trend, they survived.Also,this trend helps people assimilate into the new culture; as a result,discrimination may be ended in favor of local families by seeing diverse religions and norms.
Moreover, the tourism industry is a main source of income in numerous countries.with individual traveling overseas, government are pushed to the government to provide developed infrastructures for globetrotters such as modern accommodations, banking services, and public transportation resulting in massive flow of tourists, higher remunerations, and better economy. To cite an instance, a survey has shown that Turkey relies heavily on tourism for survival as it does not enjoy natural resources.
To conclude, not only do I disagree that the influences of tourism on destination countries are negative, but also I personally believe this phenomenon is fundamentally beneficial for them.
Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries traveled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traveling abroad gives people an opportunity to unwind and feel more happiness. Nowadays, it can be seen that quite a few people start taking trips to foreign countries. While some advocate that travel may have more demerits than merits linked to the places visited, I completely disagree with this idea believing that traveling helps people to broaden their horizons. Also it leads to economic growth for nations.
To begin with, exploring the world contributes to the cultural exchange and enrichment of host countries. For instance, before tourism’s development some regions were isolated in the world, so almost nobody was familiar with their customs which were on the verge of disappearance. However, with the prevalence of this tourism trend, they survived.Also,this trend helps people assimilate into the new culture; as a result, discrimination may be ended in favor of local families by seeing diverse religions and norms.
Moreover, the tourism industry is a main source of income in numerous countries.with individual traveling overseas, government are pushed to the government to provide developed infrastructures for globetrotters such as modern accommodations, banking services, and public transportation resulting in massive flow of tourists, higher remunerations, and better economy. To cite an instance, a survey has shown that Turkey relies heavily on tourism for survival as it does not enjoy natural resources.
To conclude, not only do I disagree that the influences of tourism on destination countries are negative, but also I personally believe this phenomenon is fundamentally beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59420289855 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16271766504 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.3356147961 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472219715487 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186503927419 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18631412091 0.0667982634062 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285920656527 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.270320745003 0.056905535591 475% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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