Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your experience and knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
There are some managers who trust that the social skill of job candidates is more significant than their academic level. In my point of view, I fully agree that possessing good social skills, apart from academic skills, can give people an edge in advancing their career.
It’s true that formal qualifications play a critical role in one’s career because they are generally good indicators of a person’s capability and specialized knowledge. In fact, there are many employers who need the employees to have specialized knowledge. This is particularly true for works that involve in-depth research and development such as information technology, computer science, and medicine. These days, if the candidates don’t have technical knowledge, they will not be hired by the companies, let alone get a promotion.
However, having only excellent credentials does not always help one’s career to be successful. In this modern society, people rarely work alone and often need to co-operate with other people like work in a team to get the best results. For that reason, people who have many soft skills to work with team members like presentation skills, communication skills, or teamwork skills will help them achieve good performance and results in their work. In contrast, those who lack such critical skills may suffer from isolation or miscommunication and trigger conflict among workers, preventing the overall working process. In short, people who possess good communication skills can often gain the love and trust of their co-workers and stand a higher chance of achieving success.
In conclusion, I believe that social skills have a strong correlation with career success as they can not only help a person integrate but also facilitate their working process.
- Some employers believe that job applicants social skills are more important than their academic qualifications Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your experience and knowledge Write a 73
- Some employers believe that job applicants social skills are more important than their academic qualifications Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your experience and knowledge Write a 73
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, apart from, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37634408602 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84611286195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3119723223 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162012337458 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625713158167 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612866639525 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112549196531 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672213037469 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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