Employers argue that interpersonal skills are more crucial for job candidates than educational skills. From my personal perspective, I strongly agree with this point of view.
To begin with, there are obvious merits of having great social abilities. Firstly, communication is one of the major factors, which helps workers to deal with different types of customers, as well as promote the relationship between buyers and sellers. For example, agents who can communicate skillfully are able to persuade clients to purchase the products easily, as well as listening to complaints and giving suitable solutions. Therefore, the business may gain more credibility and the revenue will grow. Secondly, people with social intelligence also have great teamwork skills. This helps them to get on well with employers, moreover, they may connect individuals together, so as to create a comfortable work environment for the company.
On the other hand, there are several merits of professional qualifications. Nowadays, many positions require a high level of education, therefore, it is beneficial for an applicant's curriculum vitae with educational certifications to apply for huge companies. For instance, having a wide range of knowledge helps workers to earn more salaries and improve the quality of the products.
To sum up, both book smart and street smart are vital for people who are applying for a job. However, I believe that soft skills are more advantageous.
- The chart compares the number of people per household by percentage in the UK in 1981 and 2001 90
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 61
- The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 680, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... they may connect individuals together, so as to create a comfortable work environment f...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'applicants'' or 'applicant's'?
Suggestion: applicants'; applicant's
...ion, therefore, it is beneficial for an applicants curriculum vitae with educational certi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4449339207 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04366076132 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656387665198 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3998670592 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6923076923 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210238641532 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713415063743 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448359672018 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134487373235 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498771875565 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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