Nowadays, advertisement is so ubiquitous that people can see it everywhere in their daily life. From my personal perspective, i believe that advertising can have both beneficial and detrimental effects.
On the one hand, there are plenty of benefits that advertising can provide to people, especially businesses. First of all, it is truly vital for the revenue of the business. The products can attract customers via some eye-catching advertisements, and it may become more popular. Therefore, more people will purchase the items, as well as increase the revenue of the brand. Secondly, commercials can definitely increase brand awareness, and help the company stand out from its rivals. For example, the products which is advertised more attractively may catch more attention, and gain more credibility into the bargain.
On the other hand, advertising has several negative impacts. To begin with, people will find advertisements annoying since too much commercials is appeared on television and social media. This is particularly true when people are watching or listening to their favourite programs. Furthermore, many brands are advertising their goods in a wrong way. A lot of products advertised on social media are not true, this can lead to plenty of problems. For example, some people may believe on the use of the products on those adverts and purchase it with a lot of money, however, when they receive the product, it is different from the advertisement. This may cause dissapointments and distrusts of commercials. Therefore, customers will complain about the items, and the brands will lose their credibility.
To summarize, advertising is becoming more popular. Although it has many positive effects for businesses, there are some downsides for customers.
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- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... find advertisements annoying since too much commercials is appeared on television a...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...many brands are advertising their goods in a wrong way. A lot of products advertised on social...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42753623188 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10828178725 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8372342108 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228331964026 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077301319131 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972438202266 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150102608132 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721823445517 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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