Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
Across the globe, a trend of several traditional cities turning into state-of-art places can be observed. While these areas offer a safe environment besides more job opportunities, their demerits of not only lacking the tranquil atmosphere but also uniqueness cannot be overlooked.
The revamped cities are, indubitable, more secure. This because of the improved architecture of the modern buildings, hi-tech road system with automatic traffic lights and CCTV cameras along with effective medical services. All these are resulting in lesser loss of life than before.
Moreover, the employment opportunities are more. Owing to the setup of industries in places lacking enough employers before, more youth has been able to join the workforce. For instance, has Gurgaon not gone through industrialization recently, it could not have provided thrice the number of jobs than those available there before. Consequently, with more income from taxes, these urban areas are adding to the national exchequer.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, the localities are deprived of their mental peace. Its reason is the surging competition among people, propelling them to work harder, or among organizations, creating high noise levels coming from production or construction sites, thus, causing psychological disorders for the residents. In a study conducted in numerous cities, the calmest people were found to be enjoying their time in older cities.
In addition to the peaceful environment, these lack uniqueness. With common technology used for all buildings and roads, outside travellers soon get bored of similar-looking areas, which adversely affects the tourism industry and the people involved in it.
In recapitulate, this essay has covered two areas: the upsides of modern cities, which include more safety and chances to work for its people; and their downsides, which consist of missing both peace and their own identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to still'
Suggestion: to still
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Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24621212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7685610984 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2845049717 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368291202413 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13522478203 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523287964094 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22578181111 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265954134635 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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