It is argued that a lot of big cities all over the world are developing at present, which brings about many problems. There are two major problems for young inhabitants and both of them should be tackled by the authorities.
Raised in the period of city growth, the young have to face up to two main issues. First, the cities seem to be quite over-populated. If too many people live in a certain city, there are not enough jobs created for them. As a consequence, some of them become out of work. Second, the great population means that more and more land is needed to build houses and other buildings, as we have seen in Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh City. Playing areas which youngsters really need are rapidly bought up by properly developers. Therefore, teenagers are more and more dependent on their social networks on the Internet.
The government should take steps immediately to address these problems. The key to the first challenge is that the young ought to be fully educated and given more job opportunities. Because they play a very important role in the workforce, the government cannot leave them unemployed. Furthermore, city planners had better consider using more free land for teenagers whenever they decide to build a skyscraper. It is advisable that youngsters should do sports and other leisure activities with their friends in real life instead of wasting all day online.
In conclusion, many problems stem from the rapid growth of many major cities in the world and governments should use their resources to minimize the negative impacts on young inhabitants in these cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92962962963 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68841185443 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.740963104 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230063794281 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687401516612 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722352925725 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155590654826 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627937053255 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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