Some people think that spending much on cultural and sports events is wastage while others believe it is mandatory. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
No doubt, Organising traditional or sports events a matter of pride for administration, however Ocean on expenditure has been a debatable topic whether it is regarding or not? As per question's demand I will tell some reasons in paper to spend huge sums to join event with negligible negative effects.
Anyone can be witness of invading cultural events or beliefs before idea of such programmes. The reason behind is the on awareness amongst youngsters behind to gain knowledge of precious history. But, by attending the events they can acquire a lot to pass on and to flourish their culture for example, an event at national indigenous people day is being celebrated in Brampton, Canada To give dwellers an opportunity to learn about heritage, diverse culture, distinct languages and believes of indigenous people and the past and present contributors that continues to enrich community.
Even money spent by spectaculars could be better spent on planning of more events for nations prosperity. Besides, fund raising programmes use money for welfare of performers and artists.
Conversely, Worst examples exist too where extravagant spending is being done without knowing the sole purpose of joining these cultural programs. Unfortunately, this unawareness might lead to quarrel among opponents' followers.
Conclusively, Organisers always taks a brave initiative to present cultural and sports events in amazing way for betterment but some miscreants hinder the way. I personally believe more precautions during events and strict legislation imposed by government would be wise.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e topic whether it is regarding or not? As per questions demand I will tell some r...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the Worst'.
Suggestion: , the Worst
...of performers and artists. Conversely, Worst examples exist too where extravagant sp...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g way for betterment but some miscreants hinder the way. I personally believe mor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, however, regarding, so, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54732510288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98464290636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5334346878 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16893424773 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054663071835 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404318810033 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840407460963 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424978086048 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e topic whether it is regarding or not? As per questions demand I will tell some r...
^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the Worst'.
Suggestion: , the Worst
...of performers and artists. Conversely, Worst examples exist too where extravagant sp...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g way for betterment but some miscreants hinder the way. I personally believe mor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, however, regarding, so, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54732510288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98464290636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5334346878 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16893424773 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054663071835 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404318810033 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840407460963 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424978086048 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.