When we think of lies, we usually think of bad things. However, there are moments when lying is essential in life. Therefore, I do not like lying but I think we should use it when it is necessary. I will support my opinion by showing the three moments when lies are essential.
First is the relationship between parents and children. Parents say that their children are pretty, whether they are pretty or ugly. Parents’ one time lies boost their confidence and change their personality positively. In fact, hearing good words often develops the habit of saying good things to others when the child grows up. That is why I think this level of white lies is essential for parents to their children. Also, in fact, when my friend was in middle school, she was really bad at math, so she always could not get more than fifty points. Whenever that happened, her mom comforted her that she had to try a little bit because she was good at math. Therefore, now my friend is first in math in our grade. Of course, my friend’s mom lied, but because of that, my friend became good at math, it should be used in this case.
Second, Lying is often necessary even in friendship. Usually, friends share happy or difficult things with each other. When I talk to my close friends, I tell them honestly about their worries or annoying things about my thoughts, but when I talk to a friend who is a little awkward or not that close, I try to adapt to them even if my thoughts are different. That way, we can continue our conversation in a good mood. For example, in the past, I thought it was good to be honest unconditionally, but when a friend who I became a little close to told me about a fight with another friend, I told her honestly because I thought she did something wrong, and she was disappointed. Therefore, after that, I felt that it was the best way to just empathize unless it was a really close friend.
Last, When you work or live in society, there are so many moments when we have to lie. As you can see from the drama, Korea is still an invisible class society, and in order to look good to the upper class, you have to say a lot of things that you do not want to say, and you have to endure and say good things. These days, it has become so common that it is not a lie but an ability.
Like this, there are so many moments when we should not be honest with every life cycle. Still, lying itself is deceiving and bad, so you should not use it as much as possible, but it is best to use it when you need it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 619, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...mom comforted her that she had to try a little bit because she was good at math. Therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28781512605 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33403550439 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0065633405 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0416666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921733187338 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258397594303 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317017781658 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619850911176 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033011100146 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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