Mrs barret an english speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer write a letter to mrs barret in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs Barrett, Hello good morning madam, hope you will ...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is Arie Eko and im from Jakarta, today i saw a advertised that looking for someo...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ie Eko and im from Jakarta, today i saw a advertised that looking for someone to ...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...interesting with that job and hopefully i can get it the opportunity. In this let...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...get it the opportunity. In this letter, i would like to suggest how i can could h...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...his letter, i would like to suggest how i can could help you in your home. I ...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ears ago from high school and im now as an student at Milan University near from y...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e healthy for you. For household tasks, i can help you by cleaning every corner o...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e house, washing dishes, and much more. However when i can cooking and cleaning a home ...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing dishes, and much more. However when i can cooking and cleaning a home everyda...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cook'
Suggestion: cook
...shes, and much more. However when i can cooking and cleaning a home everyday its make m...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... when i can cooking and cleaning a home everyday its make me so happy. Forthemore i can ...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eryday its make me so happy. Forthemore i can work and help you everyday in next ...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ppy. Forthemore i can work and help you everyday in next summer at 07 am until 06 pm, It...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for giving the metter your atention and i hope to hear your reply soon. Thanks fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31221719457 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37752558663 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.829361035 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303973891995 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121506245603 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104525669316 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212008904275 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741898008895 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.