It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
in this day and age, children's mental and physical development is one of the most prevalent topics. it is said that punishment is essential to discipline children at an early age. from my point of view, parents should not use strict punishment on children; on the other hand, finding approriate teaching methods is much more significant. in this essay, i will support my opinion with some examples.
to begin with, many researches indicate that punishment does not help children to undersand their problems. it is widely accepted that slapping, beating and scolding cannot correct childrend's behaviour; otherwise, children become misbehaved and averse to any discipline from their parents. in this case, punishment totally gives no effect to building children's good behaviour
another reason why i disagree with punishing children is that this kind of discipline negatively cause physical and mental damage. beyond being ineffective, punishment leaves injury on children's bodies and prevent the development of brain. in addition to physical hurt, punishment like yelling or scolding increases hormones called toxic stress, which makes children feel stressed and depressed. it may lead to a serious consequence that children become more vulnerable and isolated from society.
instead of using punishment on children, there are many other ways to help them learn acceptable behaviour. one outstanding way that doctors highly recommend is calmly explaining. parents should consistently point out children's faults and show them the consequences if they misbehave. listening to children additionally makes them feel more comfortable and take notice of what parents say.
in conclusion, i personally think that punishment is not an effective way to teach children good behaviour. parents ought to be responsible for discovering other approriate ways to educate their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65371024735 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90976043512 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3931847593 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263405097307 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907527498593 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650061888679 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146048081467 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438003182982 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.