There is a strange phenomena taking place in the moon called TLP. The passage describe there theories that can explain why the TLP generated, that is can be generated by observation error, by meteor impact, and by rocks emitting its lights. However, the professor totally refuses the author's view, he thinks none of them can explain the TLP well.
The first theory is that the TLP is not really happened, and it is because of the error caused by observation. However, it can not explain why the TLP usually happen in two specifically location. If it is an error of observation, it should just happened in random area in the lunar. In fact, there is no reporting about the random happening in the moon.
The second theory is that TLP is generated by the meteor impact, which can cause explosion and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A meteor impaction can cause light that only last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 minutes. If it is generated by the impaction, there should be a meteor shower. The fact is there is no report about any meteor shower in the lunar surface.
The third theory is that the rocks emit their own light, causing such flash. And yet, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is brighter than the rock's light. The rock's light is like the candle that be focused by a spotlight when it compared with the sunshine.
- It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation 70
- TPO 50 Independent Writing Task all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 60
- transient lunar phenomena 3
- TPO41Do you agree or disagree Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays 76
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
...ly last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 minutes. If it is generated by...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shines'.
Suggestion: shines
...t, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine be...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
... strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is br...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52651515152 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36443447578 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0604897031 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6875 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167023857284 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594473738879 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485365455169 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100619275829 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303651757919 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
...ly last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 minutes. If it is generated by...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shines'.
Suggestion: shines
...t, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine be...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
... strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is br...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52651515152 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36443447578 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0604897031 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6875 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167023857284 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594473738879 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485365455169 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100619275829 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303651757919 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.