In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Nowadays, in some countries, there have been increasing numbers of reports regarding criminal actions together with the worsening extent of violence caused by the public. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, whereas measures can be taken in order to challenge the situation.
On the one hand, there are a number of factors that may account for the surge of criminal cases in society, the most plausible explanation lies in the fact that a majority of citizens are living under the poverty line and not receiving sufficient care from the incumbent administrations. This pushes the impoverished against the walls, forcing them to develop cruel intentions and motives to conduct anything under their capability to achieve what they want. In addition, another contributory factor is that a lot of young children are not getting access to proper education and adequate surveillance in both schools and parents, leading to the fact that more and more teenagers participate in gangs and commit crimes which cause fatal deaths and antagonizing losses.
However, there are plenty of ways to tackle this problem. Firstly, to alleviate the number of criminal cases, governments should pay more attention to taking care of the impoverished, providing them with opportunities to feed their families and ensuring equal social welfare for every individual. By doing this, fewer criminal cases will occur since more and more people can get access to their basic needs. Moreover, parents and educational departments should play a pivotal role in developing students with social standards and moral values as the foundation for their future. This in the long term will create a peaceful society with responsible citizens and diminish the crime rate effectively.
To sum up, the increasing number of criminal and violent reports can be explained in many ways, and it is not only the governments that are responsible. In fact, there is a crucial need for collaboration between various sides of schools, parents and the officials to collectively tackle the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31402439024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83856854263 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7394966683 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.25 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175423930387 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621251295532 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548966403217 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995995923635 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170919041025 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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