It is true that in everyday life of everyone on earth, we all have good and bad time. Some believe we should accept those difficult times and move on while other argues that we should better the situation at hand to have a better outcome. In my opinion, we both should accept bad situation that life put us into and try our best to better the situation.
On one hand, accepting the bad situation that we are in could help us dealt with the anxious and stressful thought that the situation might cause. When we accept the bad time we are going through, we can easier compose and calm our thoughts, which in turns help us pushed back the mind fog that clouded our judgement with stress and anxiety and help us think of a solution with clarity and clearer mind that could better our own situation in the long term. For instance, during the pandemic many people have been laid off in certain professions, some of them accept the situation they are in and saw this as an opportunity to learn a new skill and language that could benefit them later on in their career.
On another hand, taking action while you are in a bad situation can be good for several reasons. Firstly, you can create your back up plan when things are not going the way that you have intended, this could help you bounce back from those difficult times. Secondly, build up your experience to handle these types of situation, with experience accumulated during those hard time helps you have a broader perspective of the situation to make better decision and learn from those difficult times. Finally, you can better the situation that you are currently in. Most people taking action immediately in bad situation so that they could reduce or curb the consequences that the situation might bring.
In conclusion, accepting bad times can help us move on with the situation and help us think with more clarity while trying to improve upon those situations can help us curb or reduce some of those consequences that they might have. And I firmly believe that we both need to accept the situation and try our best to better the situation that we are in.
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages toghther To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21 To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60582010582 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3332148526 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439153439153 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9239946545 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263403869098 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121993744422 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728243507984 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185128285501 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461767046397 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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