Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As time goes by, vary of kinds and types of jobs have been developed. Each requirement and need's society depend on technology grows which needs more expertise rather than past. Personally, I agree with this statement that in the past it was easier to identify what type of career would lead to a successful future. For a number of reasons, the technology grows fast and it depends on master people who is qualified in a certain area. Thus, it is easier for people to identify the profitable job type. In the following, I will pinpoint some outstanding reasons that support my idea.
First, In the past, the variety of jobs was less than now, and every people had a single map road for their work to be successful. It contained a number of advices and features which made to be master on their career path. After several years, it is appear that were a lot diffirences in same job categories.Foe example, in the certain job area like cooking, there were made a lot recipies for same foods, like every day using manulotion , specially bread. some cheef use different spice in that which made them more delicious and cause to this point that people like the different tasty. so it is obvious that varity is a important subject that made to cause branches in type of job.
The other reason that support my idea is, a numorus features that have strong realationshipe and corolation with peopls thought. Some attributes like becoming a doctor or lower that garante your future and support life, are out date DUE TO THIS FACT THAT these types of careers have a insurment and enough income. So it has great impact on our lives that there are several types of career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appeared'.
Suggestion: appeared
...career path. After several years, it is appear that were a lot diffirences in same job...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Foe
... lot diffirences in same job categories.Foe example, in the certain job area like c...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e foods, like every day using manulotion , specially bread. some cheef use differe...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...day using manulotion , specially bread. some cheef use different spice in that which...
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Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...t that people like the different tasty. so it is obvious that varity is a importan...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... tasty. so it is obvious that varity is a important subject that made to cause br...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dated'.
Suggestion: dated
...e your future and support life, are out date DUE TO THIS FACT THAT these types of ca...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...S FACT THAT these types of careers have a insurment and enough income. So it has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6462585034 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46859271942 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8403631036 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267772163968 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931033029428 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11138809656 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17743589391 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824124236386 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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