Nowadays competitiveness is crucial for young people. This trend affected them in a positive way in most societies. But most people think that it can be negative affect them. In my view, I think it is really positive aspect especially for youngsters.
On the one hand, it can be negative for most young people , because in order to win another group, they may argue a lot with their classmates or collegues. As a result, they would lost socializing with others, and it affected them in a negative way for their relationship.
On the other hand, it would be positive for most today's youngsters. Because in order to win they can be learn lots of things related to their work or study, and another positive side of competitiveness is that if they work with their groupmates, they can discuss lots of different topics as a result, they created lots of new ideas about their work or study in order to win another group. The main advantage of competitiveness is that they started researching a lot and it a chance for young people to broaden their horizon and working different environments and practices.
In conclusion, I would say competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. But sometimes it can be affected to individuals both positive and negative. But I think it is totally positive trend for all of individuals and it is a chance to broaden their horizons.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... young people. This trend affected them in a positive way in most societies. But most people thin...
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Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it can be negative for most young people , because in order to win another group, ...
^^
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...s or collegues. As a result, they would lost socializing with others, and it affecte...
^^^^
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...izing with others, and it affected them in a negative way for their relationship. On the other ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79079497908 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96612530173 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430962343096 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2364416728 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364392757777 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181169520775 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905544323491 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284609227869 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14984972996 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... young people. This trend affected them in a positive way in most societies. But most people thin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it can be negative for most young people , because in order to win another group, ...
^^
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...s or collegues. As a result, they would lost socializing with others, and it affecte...
^^^^
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...izing with others, and it affected them in a negative way for their relationship. On the other ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79079497908 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96612530173 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430962343096 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2364416728 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364392757777 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181169520775 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905544323491 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284609227869 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14984972996 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.