Due to the intricate, developed, and competitive world, our problems also has been extended. Therefore, methods of solving problems have also increased, but I am supposed that one of the primary ways of finding solutions is using the internet. There are several reasons why I feel this way which I will explore in the following essay.
First, the internet is more accessible; it means that everyone everywhere can find out about problems and solutions. Although this information may not be professional advice, it can be useful. My personal experience is one of the compelling examples of this. Last year we traveled to the countryside, and my son became ill; the doctor was not available, so I researched the internet and found his symptoms and found some really helpful home treatments.
Secondly, the internet provides counseling opportunities for one who does not like to speak directly; hence, vulnerable people can receive effective advice. Before the internet's advent, many people had various problems while they were worried about others' judgments and refused to consult with experts. For instance, one of my friends had private problems, but it was not easy for her to speak directly with professional experts; I encouraged her to use the internet and receive counseling by a professional expert without shaming.
Last but not least, giving updated information on the internet is ready while other resources are not. Older persons have been experienced, but their advice is antiquated and oftentimes are not employed. In addition, on the online network, interconnection is possible, and one can obtain more than one consult from various persons.
For example, my grandmother gave me different advice about upbringing children, but this advice is outdated and not along with the new knowledge, while I can receive more updated information by using online resources.
In a nutshell, I strongly believe that the internet is a novel way to solve problems, and using this technology, the concept of problem-resolving methods has been changed. In this way, the internet has more accessible, easy, convenient, and updated information. The unpredicted unsought occurrences are reduced thanks to the quick internet advice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'internets'' or 'Internet's'?
Suggestion: internets'; Internet's
...an receive effective advice. Before the internets advent, many people had various problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36467236467 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99299376953 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5121181308 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26388522209 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817955942665 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703943937587 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134695950274 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434064481557 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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