The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee
Overall, there are various stages involved in the life cycle of a honey bee,starting from a bee laying eggs to their eggs developing as mature ones. It is clear that the whole process takes between 34 and 36 days.
At the beginning of the process, the female adult generally lay one egg or two legs every three days. After a period of 9 to 10 days , the eggs hatch and the nymph emerges from the egg.
The process continues with the third stage of the life cycle ,which the offspring grows quickly in size and sheds its old skin three times during the period of its growth . The first moulting takes place in five days after the egg hatches completely . On the seventh day , it is still very small but consistently continues to grow bigger , and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle , the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the stage , it only takes 4 days for it to reach full maturity. Eventually,the cycle begins again when the honey bee mates and spawn
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43069306931 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26002494135 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8917525012 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284033572167 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109503409494 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165009793223 0.0843802449381 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285012376641 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.264891307522 0.0819641961636 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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