In many countries, if people want to find a job, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
For many years, in several nations, many usually believe that it had better to migrate to other places such as major cities or oversea countries to seek for job opportunities and leave their parents and friends behind. This trend of movement does bring about some drawbacks; nevertheless, this essay will discuss that these are outstripped by the benefits.
On the one hand, it is undeniable the number of difficulties that migrants have to face with when moving far away closest relatives and peers of themselves. The first can be that the feeling of homesickness and the sensation of loneliness. Take Vietnamese students studying abroad are as a typical example. They were likely to undergo the initial stage of setting down which was such a nightmare due to not only struggling with time zone difference, accommodation as well as other difficulties, but also lacking the supports of parents and friends, which easily leads them to suffer from depression and isolation. Furthermore, settling down in metropolis, job seekers have to cover exorbitant expenditures namely hosuing price, transport, clothes and even medication. This shoulders more financial burdens on their way of landing for a job in comparison with those sticking to linving in the rural regions. For instance, in Ho Chi Minh city, which is one of the two financial cities in Vietnam, after Ha Noi,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13452914798 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86973093294 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690582959641 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4370662747 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.222222222 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147951660983 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451206935007 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492048148159 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10910048858 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00573104500233 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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