It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several individuals support spending public money on promoting an ideal, healthy lifestyle in order to prevent potential ailments rather than using such funds for curing, and treating pre-existing patients. Personally, this measure would produce better public awareness as well as improve citizens' overall well-being, but upon approving this, I believe possible repercussions may emerge.
On the one hand, should this method find success, the public, combined with the government and medical department, will receive numerous advantages. The cost of treatments and the appropriate cure for diseases, especially for terminal illnesses, has proven far steeper than that of encouraging nutritious diets because medical care requires years of extensive research and adequate funding for effective medicines and remedies, whereas the latter only need suitable experts and practical information disseminating methods. Implementing the beforementioned measure will save time and resources, thus allowing for ampler expenditure for other projects and departments. Furthermore, adequately effective promotions of healthy lifestyles could better improve general awareness, which, in turn, enhance the public's well-being on a wide scale.
On the other hand, implementing such a measure in current society poses numerous challenges and problems which may backfire on careless planning. Humans, by nature, have proven obstinate regarding their lifestyle. In other words, delivering a healthy way of living to a wide array of citizens may become a demanding task, requiring thorough inspection and meticulous strategies. The failure of such an operation could result in catastrophic consequences in the form of wasting money or even public outrage if residents are subjected to misguided or unnecessary information.
Conclusively, personally, the idea of directing more money into encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of treatments for the current patients could create positive changes to society's well-being. However, such a measure needs to be taken with extreme caution for the potential harm it can bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98344370861 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05579627626 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672185430464 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4214311907 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140537238742 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485420477659 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658895417441 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891837174231 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501558929488 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.7 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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