When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to drawing out a scheme for new towns, there are numerous contradictory viewpoints about whether it is more crucial to set up a variety of public amusements and exercising facilities than shopping malls or not. From my personal perspective, I would take a dim view of this opinion in the belief that both types of facility are equally necessary to the town inhabitants.
On the one hand, the reasons why public facilities are beneficial to the residents can be attributed to two main factors. First and foremost, as our living pace is getting more and more hectic, people are extremely in the need of green spaces in order to relieve their stress and regain energy after hours dealing with traffic jams or polluted environments. By creating more public parks and sport centers, the locals are not only given an opportunity to have a relaxing place but also granted access to a wide range of exercising equipments, they can have a walk, play tennis or just simply enjoy the peaceful atmosphere of the area. The second reason that should be taken into consideration is the construction of public facilities may act as an adhesive to bring people closer together as it is a good chance for them to strike a conversation with their neighbors, such harmonious relationships will make that town a better living space.
On the other hand, it is the convenience and importance of shopping complexes that make it indispensable when a town is planned. Firstly, having a shopping centers within the area could make shopping more convenient for the town dwellers. It would enable them to have easier access to goods and necessities, and people do not have to spend a large amount of money on transportation or shipping costs. Secondly, it is undeniable that shopping centers can be the town’s excellent profit-generating source. The revenue getting from operating shopping complexes can be used to improve the town’s infrastructure and maintain existing buildings. Moreover, these shopping centers will be advantageous for the residents in its area as more employments will be provided.
All in all, I am on the opposite side of the given opinion and town planners should not neglect any of these facilities as they play a vital role in forming a good living area for the local inhabitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97409326425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93573044551 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9682798612 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.692307692 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6923076923 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282042785698 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961700332978 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438791789781 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149873873422 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556431816367 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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