Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is supposed by a group of people that there should be fixed sentence considering different types of offence while others hold the belief that the situations and the hidden cause should always be taken into account before final conviction. There have been so many debates between supporters of these two opinions, from my personal perspective, I would take side with the former despite some significant merits of the latter.
On the one hand, the benefits of having a set sentence to the government and individuals is somewhat undeniable. First and foremost, within fixed punishment like the death penalty or life imprisonment, potential criminals would think twice before making the unlawful decision, hence it is not only deter people from committing heinous crime but also help to lower crime rate. Secondly, the application of this method means that all citizens would be equally treated without any discrimination considering their wealth or social status. For example, the judgement for a billionaire and a farmer would be the same given that they both engage in identical criminal actions.
On the other hand, a majority of people advocates a more humane approach, which take criminals’ motivation and condition into consideration. Should people break the laws, their unlawful acts will be under examination of the jury for the most convincing sentence. That is to say, those with mental-related diseases, those who acts as bread-winner in their family or those commit a crime as the last resort to make ends meet would receive milder judgements in view of their pitiful circumstances.
In a nutshell, notwithstanding the advantages of having flexible sentences, I still adhere to the idea that having a set punishment for every one would be the most beneficial for human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22569444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91840019581 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2355451847 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323019409132 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10882308639 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815331460399 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176746990653 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307273093207 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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