As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the current era, when most of the businesses are focused on making money, there are still some others that forget the responsibilities to society. Due to the fact that social responsibility is very important and individuals whether with big or small businesses should do that. Some people think that this is meaningless and unnecessary, but I myself find that this is a very important action because it helps the development of the country. I personally suppose that everyone needs to be socially responsible. I personally suppose that everyone needs to be socially responsible
To begin with, companies make money to take care of people's lives, to develope their companies so that businesses can create their material values. Also, companies nowadays often pay great attention to contributing money to social areas such as contributing funds to building charity houses for children in mountainous areas and building free schools for poor children. Thus, people can understand how important social responsibility is and ignore need to do it together like paying taxes or participating in charity activities. Referring to the world's largest charities, the Stichting INGKA Foundation cannot be mentioned. Founded by Swedish billionaire Ingvar Kamprad, the founder of the worldwide famous furniture retail chain IKEA with a budget of about $36 billion. Therefore, the next paragraph will explain why do we have to be socially responsible.
In fact, this is a really necessary action because it could bring to the people and the country the benefits for both private and common. Since, this action helps businesses contribute to social goals as a humanitarian business, working for the community by participating in, supporting volunteer activities or performing ethical activities. As the result, it is no longer just a voluntary decision at the level of an individual organization, but has become a mandatory policy of any organization whether at regional or national level.
In conclusion, through the benefits that social responsibility could brings to human and community, I personally admit that everyone even from large or small businesses should carry out their responsibilities and put attempts and efforts it for the good common, and that should be done with the cooperation and linking from every single person and every individual business.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...in charity activities. Referring to the worlds largest charities, the Stichting INGKA Foundati...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...nefits that social responsibility could brings to human and community, I personally ad...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39945652174 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0903501994 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3313697944 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.928571429 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20680953757 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701120790605 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617767840647 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118363805728 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626371212505 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...in charity activities. Referring to the worlds largest charities, the Stichting INGKA Foundati...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...nefits that social responsibility could brings to human and community, I personally ad...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39945652174 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0903501994 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3313697944 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.928571429 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20680953757 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701120790605 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617767840647 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118363805728 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626371212505 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.