Nowadays people are getting married and having children in their thirties. Does it have a positive or a negative impact? Give your opinion and examples.
It is true that in the modern era, more and more individuals make up their minds to settle down in their thirties. Numerous have anticipated that this minefield creates pressure and slows down the development of the whole society. Nevertheless, I firmly believe in the freedom and the further education that each person may receive when delaying their marriage.
First of all, people who are still single after their thirties may have opportunities to experience aspects of life. While married ones are snowed with being good mothers and fathers, being single facilitates others to have private time for living life to the fullest. As an illustration, single individuals can take a trip twice a month but unfortunately, those who have already married, cannot allow sufficient time to travel to a plethora of destinations.
Furthermore, in order to pursue further education and support the communities, citizens are willing to delay their marriage. For those who prioritize knowledge over the wedding, they desire to devote their time to studying, possessing the breadth of the knowledge and making a contribution to the long-term growth of society. For instance, it has been recorded that a few greatest late doctors of all time mainly were single and quietly made plenty of inventions in laboratories contributing to a bright future.
To summarize, time to enjoy life and the desire to develop society are two primary positive effects for each person and their communities if they decide to delay marriage. However, owing to avoiding some health problems, it may be a great option if inhabitants can find an appropriate time to get married.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88504627358 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1681655773 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146981651077 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561139180413 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444588886384 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840448098105 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468250086673 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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