Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.
Health plays a significant role in deciding people’s life expectancy. Some people state that active involvement in sports would increase the life span, hence, they demand more sports centers. In the meanwhile, others expect other aspects that have to be considered to keep people healthier. From my perspective, I strongly agree that government has to work on a number of measures along with increasing sports facilities to have the ideal health condition of people.
On one side of the argument, some believe more number of sports facilities only would cater this increasing population. They sta...
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You may use them 2-3 times in one essay, not more than that. The IELTS examiners can easily figure them out.
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in spite of the abundant development of entertaining industry
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some people prefer
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 332 350
No. of Characters: 1773 1500
No. of Different Words: 188 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.269 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.34 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.701 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.156 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5