Government funding for purely scientific endeavors, such as space exploration, should be reduced in order to direct more funding toward humanitarian science projects.
The statement links between the human approach to advance sciectific endeavours and our responsibilities towards our fellow humans. Looking over the timeline of human existence our zeal to understand our lives and looking for explanations directly influences our scientific curiosity. Building on this reasoning, centuries ago humans looked towards the stars to understand their meaning and scientific endeavours were built towards explaining the existence of space and their meaning. This curiosity has led to many inventions such as highly efficient combustion engines, accurate imaging that can pierce through space debris, commincation systems that would be in-comprehensible to population just a century back. We live in a economy that revolved under monetary ideolog, as a person building this scientific curiosity to technologies that are an integral part of a layman’s life is next to impossible. This scientific curiosity backed by funds from a government body leads to technologies that play an important part in the future.
Over the century we can have a panoramic view of how tcehnologies have changed the way people are leading their lives from PDAs that provide an advance tecle-commnication service to the high end imagery devices that is helping industries track and cut cost off availing resources. All these innovations that has helped people lives are derived from purely scientific endeavors. For example satellites that use technologies like high end imagery can predict disasters like floods and storms , this information can be used to help reduce the devastation caused to thousands of people. This scientific innovation is not possible to accomplish just by a scientist with curiosity to find this solution, it is the government’s responsibility to fund the projects that have an implication and benefits towards a whole collective of people.
We can also take an example from technologies evolving from pure scientific endeavors such as hydroponics where people are working towards preserving water as well as boosting agricultural produce. Although this seems like a purely scientific, its implications and the information derived from it will be used towards curbing food and water shortage. This task cannot be carried out without funding from government bodies.
The statement does strike an argument that many endeavors looking for an explanation towards in-comprehensible things such as black holes, mars expedition, moon exploration missions do not serve as much purpose as humanitarian projects which help people live lives with basic amenities such as food, water and shelter. We cannot face away from the fact that these endeavors taken to understand the universe around us is to utilize the information ultimately to collectively benefit people. The hard fact is that this endevaors take a lot of time to be fruitful and even though presently seem to be to content ones scientific curiosity , will finally help better people life as a collective. As we can observe this from the introduction of this essay, the benefits will be evident in the upcoming centuries.
Hence, with all this evidenceand examples, as scientific endeavors are ultimately to ameliorate peoples everyday lives , their importance cant be reduced for as they too serve the goal of helping people as much as the humanitarian projects. Government should not reduce the funding for pure scientific projects as a reason to direct them towards humanitarian science projects.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 727, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ulation just a century back. We live in a economy that revolved under monetary id...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... service to the high end imagery devices that is helping industries track and cut...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has helped people lives are derived from purely scientific endeavors. For example...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...predict disasters like floods and storms , this information can be used to help re...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding universe'?
Suggestion: the surrounding universe
...hat these endeavors taken to understand the universe around us is to utilize the information ultimatel...
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Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is to utilize the information ultimately to collectively benefit people. The hard...
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Line 7, column 636, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be to content ones scientific curiosity , will finally help better people life as...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ely to ameliorate peoples everyday lives , their importance cant be reduced for as...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oples everyday lives , their importance cant be reduced for as they too serve the go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2956.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49442379182 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10346852852 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2421773612 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.578947368 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3157894737 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29988445159 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105462449668 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118968950123 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197844494403 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103790082624 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 727, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ulation just a century back. We live in a economy that revolved under monetary id...
^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... service to the high end imagery devices that is helping industries track and cut...
^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has helped people lives are derived from purely scientific endeavors. For example...
^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...predict disasters like floods and storms , this information can be used to help re...
^^
Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding universe'?
Suggestion: the surrounding universe
...hat these endeavors taken to understand the universe around us is to utilize the information ultimatel...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is to utilize the information ultimately to collectively benefit people. The hard...
^^
Line 7, column 636, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be to content ones scientific curiosity , will finally help better people life as...
^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ely to ameliorate peoples everyday lives , their importance cant be reduced for as...
^^
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oples everyday lives , their importance cant be reduced for as they too serve the go...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2956.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49442379182 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10346852852 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2421773612 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.578947368 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3157894737 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29988445159 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105462449668 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118968950123 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197844494403 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103790082624 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.