Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, thanks to several technological advances, an increasing number of people now prefer to work and study in their private accommodation instead of going to offices or schools. As far as I am concerned, this situation provides both benefits and drawbacks for individuals. This essay will discuss two sides of the matter as well as mention some convincing examples.
On the one hand, looking at the bright aspects of this development, one of the most desirable benefits of working and studying at home is certainly the flexibility. It is indisputable that workers and students will be given the freedom of time to properly manage their schedules to fit them nicely. To be more specific, an office worker will have more free time for recreational activities and his family since the daily commuting time has been cut off. Another contributory factor that makes the development seem positive highlights the working environment. Take artists and those who major in creative fields as an example, working and studying from home absolutely offer them the ideal conditions to boost their productivity and academic performance. Therefore, the given progress is considered to be beneficial in some respects.
However, on the other hand, there are some possible disadvantages to this common trend. First and foremost, people's social skills will be seriously affected, given the less amount of interaction and in-person communication they encounter. Since a huge amount of time is allocated to online platforms assisted by gadgets and technological devices, people are more likely to be less engaged in social activities, which is an unwelcome consequence. In addition, working and studying from home can lead to a sedentary lifestyle since people stay all day inside without any essential physical activities. This in the long term can cause obesity and other illnesses that have detrimental impacts on individuals' medical conditions.
To sum up, the given development can be both beneficial and risky in some ways depending on how people make use of the merits and steer clear of the negative points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25443786982 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95228324037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600591715976 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3448468415 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178661691519 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534942855156 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404501471686 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966738780968 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436404084817 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.