It is true to confirm that many inventions of the last hundred years, especially technological tools has affected people's lives in many aspects. Among these such convenient tools, people are facing the dilemma whether or not computers are the best invention. In my point of view, I partly agree with this phenomenon and this essay will examine two sides of this statement and provide a reasonable conclusion.
The argument that computers in the most crucial inventions through many years of scientific life is reasonable to some extent. To begin, people speculate this may be true to the fact that with the development of computers, they can reduce their time and energy on any project at workplaces or at schools. For instance, Phu Nhuan students always have to find information for their presentations and with computers, they ought to search for their needs faster than find information outdoors. Moreover, thanks to the invention of computers, people have more opportunity to work at home. This means that due to 4.0 era, officers and students can work and learn at any places if they have computers and the Internet. Hence, this invention benefits to people in modern life.
Apart from practical benefits expressed above, I believed that computers also bring downsides to customers and there are much more inventions that also play an important role in our daily life. First of all, the computer is convenient but it also has their own downsides such as large and heavy in size and weight so it may be a challenge for customers to bring from place to place. Instead of that, the lately invention of laptops with lighter weight and smaller size can definitely solve the computer's issue. For example, business man who have to move a lot because of the characteristics of their career and in case of that, they might choose laptops instead of computers. Next, people cannot work with computers without the invention of the Internet and apps such as Word, PowerPoint or Excel. Therefore, like other inventions, the invention computers also have their own disadvantages.
To conclude, despite the fact that the invention of computers helps people to save their time, money and energy but it may be inconvenient in some cases. I strongly believe that the series of technological inventions should support others to have to best function for customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...nt tools, people are facing the dilemma whether or not computers are the best invention. In my...
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...the best invention. In my point of view, I partly agree with this phenomenon and ...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: heavy
...s their own downsides such as large and heavy in size and weight so it may be a challenge for...
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...Excel. Therefore, like other inventions, the invention computers also have their ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...nventions should support others to have to best function for customers.
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...to have to best function for customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73525693606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3828165837 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.470588235 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216836575237 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729493417103 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367540272681 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129414461712 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275458939197 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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