In this day and age, it becomes a trend that more and more young people choose to work and study in another specific country. This trend has brought to public attention and there are many who believe that this is a best choice ever for learners and workers to find experiences. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon has both merits and drawbacks, and two sides will be discussed in this eesay and the conclusion will be submitted.
On he one side of the argument, living abroad has attracted by both parents and children due to some reasons. Firstly, people might want to visit some of famous historical monuments and explore new cultures, so it leads to a decision of working abroad. Next, there are many educators who provide their undergraduate the information about the expansion of knowledge and hundred of opportunities when theyy have an ability to learn in other countries. However, drawbacks which are related to mental health still exist. For instance, homesick and isolated feelings might be appeared for the first period of time especially when people cannot adapt the new environment. Hence, living abroad is only neccessary and benefits for some needed or particular residents.
On the other hand, there are a minority of citizens who decide to live and grow up at where they were bornt because of many ideas. First of all, I think this is a best choice for human who is not able to speak a second language and find difficulties in expanding social circle. Moreover, people also want to stay at their hometown because their parents are still alived and respecting every family memories. In contrast, if citizens do not live abroad, there are some moments they might fail in the mood of boring due to the only culture and plenty of familiar places. Furthermore, fewer chances to make new friends and meet far relatives must be accepted in this case.
To conclude, while a majority of city-dwellers hope to go to other countries and make a living, my perspective goes with the latter idea because of the enlisted reasons and personal income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you mean 'On the one'?
Suggestion: On the one
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...on about the expansion of knowledge and hundred of opportunities when theyy have an abi...
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Suggestion: period
...eelings might be appeared for the first period of time especially when people cannot adapt the...
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Suggestion: the
...ny ideas. First of all, I think this is a best choice for human who is not able t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, for instance, i think, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85552407932 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61817377584 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589235127479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5360502544 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14957472836 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456646749157 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396494007194 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819596978002 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217198523992 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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