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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 7.0 500% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 35.0 6.8 515% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 104.0 5.60731707317 1855% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 33.7804878049 266% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3344.0 965.302439024 346% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 741.0 196.424390244 377% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51282051282 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.21740502335 3.73543355544 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78971735633 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 106.607317073 283% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407557354926 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1022.4 283.868780488 360% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.487689872 43.030603864 399% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.777777778 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102496863148 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038651875162 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394430371224 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446367840063 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047711795575 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 40.7170731707 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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