some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's modern world, big cities account for majority of industries, ministries and a good number of businesses. many people might even argue that vertical cities are much more condusive for general well being and overall life standard than horizontal cities. In this essay i will discuss both views in detail.
horizontal cities sprawl in wide directions and extend up to several land mass which consists of suburbs and many underdeveloped regions. Although its size sounds good it comes with more cons than pros. giving its size catering to its individualistic needs can prove difficult. moreover it harbors more people than it can maintain which can lead to several lacking areas.
On the other hand, vertical cities are primarily defined by a smaller land mass engrossed with large sky scrapers and highly developed infrastructures. in contrast, indigenes of such occupancy have a relatively lesser count. As a result, time is focused on providing the best services .
in conclusion, both are great places to live and are characterised by the different purpose they serve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29479768786 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83057500203 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5555009315 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217222389942 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066599459909 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486371039896 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11225380224 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507436849113 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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