You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Gurdaas Maan,
I am writing this letter regards the music concert was held on last Saturday night at Shivaji Stadium New Delhi. There were multiple singers came from foreign countries, and who sang songs with their bands with full of energy.
Moreover, I would like mention that, in the last you had sung a song named as: Ki Banu Dunia Da" which your one of the best songs, I ever heard in my life. I clearly remember that I was over the nine clouds while listing to your song. Furthermore, I am huge fan of you, and I listened all your songs which were sung by you. Regarding your performance during the concert was mesmerizing, and still I feel beat of music in my ears.
In addition to this, I am also a part time singer, and I want to listen your music anytime, anyplace. I have been singing songs since 2015, when first I heard your song, named as "Mitha". While listing to your music, immediately I started sang a song. One on my friend made a recording of that songs as well as he uploaded on YouTube.
Consequently, my song got popularity, also I got calls as well as emails from multiple composers to sing songs for them. Nevertheless, my desire is, to sing a song with you. I can make manage the timetable accordingly and I can be available as per your schedule.
It would be very grateful, if you may reply to this letter.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ears. In addition to this, I am also a part time singer, and I want to listen your music...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, while, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52777777778 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61431450626 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9973736329 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0666666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243233417639 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862909006997 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719101292953 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146737676025 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784009600015 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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