TPO 17
The passage mainly explains that growing in human population and agriculture hurt to birds' habitat and population. However, the lecture introduces some evidences that undermine such claim.
First, the article claims that human by increasing in its population needs more settlements, it seems destruction birds' habitat. The profesore casts doubt this point by saying that although growth human population reduces population some birds, at least this new condition is lucrative for others like peogen and sea goal owing to more food and place for living.
Second, improving in agriculture activities provides an opportunity for growth of human population, this condition destroys birds' habitat more, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer. She mentions that nowadays, less ereas are used for new agriculture lands than past. In addition, getting more products is related to better agriculture procudure and new products not destroys wilderness ereas.
Third, the reading points that human more use from pesticides than past, and it kills birds or reduces their reproducing successfully. In contrast, the speaking says that in these days pesticides have less negative impacts on creatures because first, pesticides are less toxic, and second, human use from pest resistance crops that are able to tolerate pest attacking.
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growing in human population and agriculture hurt to birds' habitat and population.
the growing in human population and agriculture hurts birds' habitat and population.
it seems destruction birds' habitat.
it seems destructing birds' habitat.
The profesore casts doubt this point by saying
The professor casts doubt on this point by saying
although growth human population reduces population some birds
although the growth of human population reduces population for some birds
new products not destroys wilderness ereas.
new products do not destroy wilderness areas.
Sentence: Third, the reading points that human more use from pesticides than past, and it kills birds or reduces their reproducing successfully.
Description: The fragment that human more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace human with adverb
Sentence: The profesore casts doubt this point by saying that although growth human population reduces population some birds, at least this new condition is lucrative for others like peogen and sea goal owing to more food and place for living.
Error: profesore Suggestion: professor
Sentence: She mentions that nowadays, less ereas are used for new agriculture lands than past.
Error: ereas Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition, getting more products is related to better agriculture procudure and new products not destroys wilderness ereas.
Error: ereas Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: procudure Suggestion: procedure
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 1101 1200
No. of Different Words: 123 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.424 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.648 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.465 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.412 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.693 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4